Still working on page 32...again

Today I refined some of the line art by removing overlapping and tangent lines that I created in the initial sketches. Then I flatted the main characters. I like the idea for this page. However, the picture has too much empty space, but there will be text to settle into those spaces. I have one more thought: there should be more objects scattered around to give the room a lived-in vibe.

Earlier in the day I installed Windows 11 on my seven-year old Thinkpad. It works great. In my spare time I’ll set the computer up as a backup for my desktop machine. If we have to evacuate, I’ll have all of my software on the laptop and all of my files in iCloud and OneDrive.