Starlight Goodbye for Betty and Jimmy
/This is another version of Jimmy and Betty saying goodbye on the beach. In the background the Ferris wheel and circus tents are supposed to be brightly lit, but I can see that they need some help. Note to self: they seem to be the right size when they’re enlarged on a 27-inch screen, but when they’re reduced to A5, they’re too small. The moral is: check your artwork at the publication size.
The sand needs something — perhaps a sea shell or two. Jimmy and Betty need some shadows, too.